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  • RecklessPaperHeart

    RecklessPaperHeart (100)

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    Shweet! Glad you like it :D I`, skeptical about the characters... I might change it a tad, but i`ll keep it up for now :P
    February 23rd, 2013 at 11:25pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Dear author, you don't have to worry, your writing style seems nice. I especially liked the last two paragraphs of the first chapter on the guy's POV. By the way comment virginity is mine so YAY!!! *dances around in the house* ~Marian.
    February 23rd, 2013 at 11:08pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Dear author, you don't have to worry, your writing style seems nice. I especially liked the last two paragraphs of the first chapter on the guy's POV. By the way comment virginity is mine so YAY!!! *dances around in the house* ~Marian.
    February 23rd, 2013 at 11:08pm
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