Uhm I love you so much for writing this because I have always wanted to read a fic like this SO THANK YOU SO MUCH. as for the first chapter it was so perfect, I really like your writing. It didn't bore me and it was overall really interesting. I am so excited for this story ^.^
Dear author, the story's title didn't really pull me to read it but I liked the summary, it was rather interesting. I liked the first chapter, it was nicely written and it slowly brought us in her life. I liked how things got interesting in the end when blackness took over and he was the reason of it. I think you are off to a great start. I almost forgot, comment virginity is mine so YAY!!! *dances around in the room* :P ~Marian.
Dear author, the story's title didn't really pull me to read it but I liked the summary, it was rather interesting. I liked the first chapter, it was nicely written and it slowly brought us in her life. I liked how things got interesting in the end when blackness took over and he was the reason of it. I think you are off to a great start. I almost forgot, comment virginity is mine so YAY!!! *dances around in the room* :P ~Marian.