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  • Red The Small

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    I can't wait for the next chapter! Kaner's words are hung in the air and it's thiiiiiiick :) Great update!
    March 14th, 2013 at 11:04pm
  • jee2

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    Ah I feel so spoiled with these updates and love it! I love the character building you used, i.e. the soup and her love for 80s movies.
    March 14th, 2013 at 05:27pm
  • gcfansara1

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    Awww! Why can't Jazz and Jon just be together? I love Jazz with Stalberg, but she keeps thinking about Jon! Gah! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    March 12th, 2013 at 08:12pm
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    I just read this whole story tonight, and it is so good. I can't wait to read more :)
    March 12th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • alwaysadreamer

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    Ugh can she just get with Jon already. Sorry I love Stalberg but her and Jonny need to happen.
    March 11th, 2013 at 06:38am
  • jee2

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    It was great! You were so perfectly descriptive! I could literally picture everything, except for maybe Jazz. She's always a little blurry in my imagination/hard for me to imagine what she'd look like, haha.
    March 11th, 2013 at 05:27am
  • LDW Choice

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    Correction to your A/N: Kaner got two goals. Just saying.
    March 11th, 2013 at 05:16am
  • Red The Small

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    Daww! <3 Stally.
    I'm pretty sure the 'hawks are just feeling bad being winners, and are letting other teams to win now ;)
    March 11th, 2013 at 04:42am
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    Daww! <3 Stally.
    I'm pretty sure the 'hawks are just feeling bad being winners, and are letting other teams to win now ;)
    March 11th, 2013 at 04:42am
  • jee2

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    Just discovered this story and am in love!
    March 11th, 2013 at 03:39am
  • Red The Small

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    Great chapter! :)
    March 10th, 2013 at 09:44pm
  • Red The Small

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    Oh no!
    March 6th, 2013 at 11:32pm
  • Red The Small

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    Kannneerrr <3 The game was amazing to watch! And great chapter! :)
    March 3rd, 2013 at 11:44pm
  • Red The Small

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    Eeeeek! I love this! Update soon!
    March 3rd, 2013 at 08:16pm
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    @ alien.94
    Oops! My lack of geographic knowledge. Thanks; I'll fix that.
    February 26th, 2013 at 06:47pm
  • alien94

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    So I don't know if you meant it like this but the way you worded it in your story you made it sound like the city of Winnipeg is in the province of Québec, but it's not, it's actually in the province of Manitoba. So if you didn't know I just wanted to update you so that you could get the correct places in your story!
    February 26th, 2013 at 04:37pm
  • Red The Small

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    Aww! <3
    February 26th, 2013 at 07:41am
  • amykart

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    I love this!
    February 25th, 2013 at 01:03am
  • Red The Small

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    I really like this! :) Update soon!
    February 23rd, 2013 at 10:57pm
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