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  • LoReedus

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    @ Lilylovelyx10 Thank you for your honesty! It was a little cliche but it's hard to fit so much that I had going on in my head in 1,000 words or less.
    I'm sorry to hear you didn't enjoy the whole thing but I do appreciate you taking the time to read it up to the end.
    And thank you for saying I'm an amazing writer. That truly means a lot :)
    June 12th, 2013 at 07:43am
  • Lilylovelyx10

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    It was good until the end. Such a predictable tradgedy with the whole losing the baby thing. I figured that'd happen when Loren became pregnant. It ruined the whole thing imo. Esp since she already had an abortion and a miscarriage. too much clashing and issues going on. some things were too convenient too. I was hoping for a more original ending :( You're an amazing writer though. Just the story line was a little questionable.
    June 12th, 2013 at 02:01am
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    @ LoReedus
    Yur great at what yu do:)!
    June 11th, 2013 at 08:06pm
  • Mad1212

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    OMG best story ever I swear it was amazing i don't want it to end please make a sequel :D
    June 11th, 2013 at 04:27pm
  • LoReedus

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    @ Rawrliz Yay!!!! Hahaha Mr. Green
    June 11th, 2013 at 08:46am
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    Omfg!! I screamed with joy!!!!
    June 11th, 2013 at 08:30am
  • Keira91_WolfQUEEN

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    this was so sad....pls update soon
    May 20th, 2013 at 02:12am
  • hale.

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    HOLY SHIT BRO!
    May 19th, 2013 at 09:59am
  • hale.

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    OH MY GOD YAY
    May 16th, 2013 at 11:35am
  • Mad1212

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    I'm into chapter 30 so far and I can't believe she would start making out and dry humping friggen Jon I honestly don't like her now she's kind of a slut :/ but I love this story :)
    May 11th, 2013 at 04:32pm
  • Keira91_WolfQUEEN

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    Wow i defiantly wasn't expecting that... o.O
    Pleeeeeaaassseeee update again soon!
    May 10th, 2013 at 03:21am
  • Aequitaas

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    Awww! Omg I so wasn't expecting her to get pregnant lol! Can't wait for the next chapter! Mr. Green
    May 9th, 2013 at 08:40am
  • k.louise

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    Omg awwww ! I hope this goes well ! Babies are precious so they better have one
    May 9th, 2013 at 06:54am
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    dakefhsriuth this chapter was so cute oh my God I loved it! x
    May 9th, 2013 at 04:00am
  • LoReedus

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    @ murphy mcmanus I try Mr. Green
    May 9th, 2013 at 02:51am
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    @ LoReedus
    You're the best!
    May 9th, 2013 at 02:49am
  • LoReedus

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    @ murphy mcmanus JK. ONE MORE CHAPTER.
    May 9th, 2013 at 02:35am
  • LoReedus

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    @ murphy mcmanus well that's a damn good thing to wake up to lol!! i want to keep writing so bad after this new chapter i just posted but i have to go back to my normal life for today. ugh. more tomorrow!! Very Happy Very Happy
    May 9th, 2013 at 02:29am
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    @ LoReedus
    I was excited cause I woke up to this
    May 9th, 2013 at 12:42am
  • LoReedus

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    @ murphy mcmanus Bahahahaha!!!!!!!
    May 9th, 2013 at 12:32am
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