Champagne Supernova - Comments

OH THEY ARE SO CUTE OMFG

I don't usually read ID fanfiction, but this one seems completely different to all of the others that I've seen. I love the relationship that Effy and Harry have. Someone below said it was like they were best friends, but not in the usual way. They seem to have all of the markings of a great relationship, but can't seem to fully admit that they would work well together. I like that Harry has things that he dislikes about her. I like that he kind of slates her eye makeup and that he likes to mess up her routines. It's those little things that show how real the relationship is and I really think that adds massively to the story.

The whole situation with Will and Harry deleting the text message is interesting within itself. In fact, Will himself seems really interesting, I can't wait to see where you go with that. I also can't wait to see Effy's reaction fi she finds out what Harry did.

The way you write is really lovely to read through as well. Everything flows perfectly and you've managed to find the balance between description and dialogue. This story is just so easy to read through.

For a 1D fanfiction, I'm really enjoying this so far. I look forward to seeing where you take Harry and Effy's relationship in the future!

If something bad happens to Harry in terms of his relationship with Effy I will gladly take her. I love the dynamic between her and Harry, and how the story is written (which is to say, your writing voice, haha). They're so cute together, but at the same time it's like they're destroying each other, which makes it quite sad. Some of your sentences really stood out to me in that they were so funny or well written. And I can't believe Harry did that yup Effy's going to kill him, I just know it.

OOOOOOH SHIT HARRY YOU'RE SCREWED WHEN SHE FINDS OUT

Oh Harry I can see why he did it though.
I loved that update!

I suppose ask and ye shall receive! I love this story. I want to know more about this Will character and why sir Harry is so unfond of him! As always you're a fantastic writer and I can't wait to hear more.

update soon? I miss this :(

She sounded like Minnie Mouse on methamphetamine.
I loved that line… Never read a line like that before.

She always walked with such purpose and direction.
Reminds me of a Blink 182 song…

I like the voice you have in hear, it’s easy to get a feel of the character’s that way. It tells half of the story; their voice. I love her name too, I’m always so jealous of authors who give their character’s great names, I can only think of normal ones :(

This is such a lovely story! I just love it! Effy and Harrys' relationship is different, but it's not. They're these best friends who bicker and tease and all sorts of other brother-sister like mannerisms. But, also, they're sort of like those two people who you know like each other, but can't get the other to admit it. That's what I think, anyway.

I am in awe at your ability to write so cleanly and flawlessly. I wasn't ever confused because you spelled a word wrong. I didn't get hung up because you jumbled words. I could read this chapter through without having to figure out what was happening because you wrote everything in a way that just flowed. You're incredibly talented (I can't stress that enough) and I'm so jealous.

This has become one of my favorite stories on here! I'm looking forward to future chapters! :)

I am loving this so far. especially the way you write Harry.

Effy and Harry are precious :3
I loved that chapter!

who needs underwear at all omg I'm crying
u so cheeky Harry
AW HER CAT'S NAME IS TIKI
AND NOEL GALLAGHER IS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC
I LOVE HIM
IF I HAD A GUN IS MY FAV YO
aw they're so cuuuuuute c;
I wish I was half as clean and organized as Effy LOOOOL

I like this so far (:

I absolutely love this. Effy is such a unique character and I'm so intrigued by her already, and I love that for once it's the guy not knowing whether the other person feels the same was about them. Their relationship is hilarious and I just love it. He's so sweet to her but she's so refreshingly different that it's all just . Your writing is so simple but so enthralling at the same time. This story is incredible!

So I read the first chapter to this the other day, and, well, it was perfection. You write so flawlessly, as if it's just natural that you not make any mistakes and the ideas flow to you quickly and effortlessly. I envy you for that, by the way. ;)

Anyway. The relationship you painted between Harry and Effy is brilliant. I like how he seems to be like a puppy with her, just wanting to get her attention as much as possible and never really leave her side. But I like how Effy is sort of uncaring about whether he's friends with her or not.

Then, alas, at the end, we get that underlying I-love-you-but-you-don't-know- kind of thing, which just makes this story even better, if that's possible. It'll be interesting to see how you navigate that (if I've guessed correctly).

Overall, this is one of my favorite ongoing stories. After reading a bunch of, honestly, crap that just feature one of the 1D lads, it's nice to find a story that seems to already have some direction and be written so well.

Seriously, though. Kudos to you for being so talented, and I hope you update soon because I want to just read and read. :)

i love this song and i love oasis, and oh my, i think i will love this story as well! (which, you know, is something new because i don't usually read about harry.)

well this looks genius. they have a ton of chemistry right off the bat and I love that in a story. update soon please.

ooh I do like this a lot

amazing. I love the main character, she so unique:)