Kneel. - Comments

Beautifully written, I felt as if your words were taking me far beyond this world.

Wow, this was magnificent! Thank you so much for writing this! :D

I was amazed and captivated by the description in the summary, so I just had to continue reading. You describe everything so perfectly that it is so clear in my head. Your writing was so beautiful. I'm so glad I came across this story and gave it a shot, because it was just so good in every way.

I feel like this story was "devastatingly poetic". Poetic is definitely a good word to describe the style of writing, especially for the first part. Also, there was so much more to it than the sex scene, and I'm glad there was. It truly adds to the awesomeness of the story.

I hope you're proud of this piece, because it is really something wonderful. Like the person below me said, bravo.

SO DEVASTATINGLY BEAUTIFUL. Almost tragic in a way, but glorious nonetheless. Bravo ;)