That was a very interesting, promising start. You did a great job with introducing the characters; I like them all already (although that might be partly influenced by the fact that I have massive amounts of love for Infinite ). I look forward to reading more!
AAAAAAH ;AAA; AN INFINITE FANFIC. AM I DREAMING? I love them. ;-; I love how it started off with Dongwoo and how silly he is - I love Dongwoo so much sdnflaksntlwa and awww Sungjong hiding from a girl, how cute! c: hehe, and the mention of Woohyun's greasiness ;AA; spot on. Can't wait to see how this unfolds! (:
I liked looking at the pictures and gifs. Cute! I liked listening to the songs too.
I liked the way the story started off. *mental note- never have my own business and hire teenagers* The dialog was great. I would just say make the font a little bigger? I was squinting my eyes trying to read it.