Because of You - Comments

  • Katzens

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    Yay! Another Inspirit.
    August 30th, 2013 at 07:36am
  • Teenage Dirtbag.

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    That was a very interesting, promising start. You did a great job with introducing the characters; I like them all already (although that might be partly influenced by the fact that I have massive amounts of love for Infinite XD). I look forward to reading more!
    April 14th, 2013 at 02:24pm
  • yang yoseob.

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    AAAAAAH ;AAA; AN INFINITE FANFIC. AM I DREAMING? I love them. ;-; I love how it started off with Dongwoo and how silly he is - I love Dongwoo so much sdnflaksntlwa and awww Sungjong hiding from a girl, how cute! c: hehe, and the mention of Woohyun's greasiness ;AA; spot on. Can't wait to see how this unfolds! (:
    April 3rd, 2013 at 01:47am
  • delirium.

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    So, within the first few paragraphs I fell in love. Mainly because I could see the expression and the whole 'Aish' killed me. I'm loving this.

    I love this. This is such a cute story, it is very well written, and the layout--LOVE IT. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more. Crazy
    March 30th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • Ghoul Scouts

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    I liked looking at the pictures and gifs. Cute! In Love I liked listening to the songs too.

    I liked the way the story started off. *mental note- never have my own business and hire teenagers*
    The dialog was great. I would just say make the font a little bigger? I was squinting my eyes trying to read it.
    March 27th, 2013 at 09:26pm