Storm Brew - Comments

Ha! Anna and Aric sharing a room ? I love it !!! Wonder how that will turn out

The more I reread this chapter...the more I feel Nate's pain... Please update soon !!!

Oh my gosh... Melissa did not strike me to me the kind of person who rebels. But if she is under that much pressure and Anna and Nate are always around her, giving her no air to breathe... well she was going to crack sometime. (I liked the change though. It shows that Mel isn't always a goodie 2 shoes)
Aric is such a stalker though! I swear he is following them, just to keep Mel out of trouble. It's sweet that he doesn't do anything to harm her, and he lets her stay with him.

Please update soon!

My heart just broke a little. This is probably the best chapter yet!

I love it!!!! It's so full of passion and hurt and anguish. Update!!!

AHH! Mel give up you cannot resist him!!! XD

Mel and nate just need to make up. Its driving me nuts that they aren't together

Noo!! Read that in school and had a little year! God darn it!!! That was so sad. I can only imagine how their relationship is going to work now with her being fierce. :))) can't wait for you to update again. I love this story so much. <3

Really with the cliffhanger again. I want to know whether she;s gonna be murdered or not. Lol. I'm liking the fact that she can fight back now, though, she should've called Anna or something. Anna's probably very mad and very worried right now. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!! =)

Love the Mel promo and Damn you with these cliff hangers!!!

What!? Clifhanger!?? I'm having a nightmare right...? Update!!

GAH more!!!!!

My favorite chapter so for is chapter 8. Who knew Mel was afraid of ghosts?

Ooooo is Nate back???? I like Aric better:)

0.0 please update. I so wanna know what's going to happen. I love this I can't wait for the next chapter :)))

Please let her fight Nate. Please. I think they both need it.

Awesome! I read the first and now just finished this one, great story! Hope you write more:)

I can't wait to see how she's going to turn out!

I'm loving the new Mel !!!

I hope that she grows to be a little bad ass when she knows how to fight. What will Nate think when he sees her new self? Gosh, I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!! I can't wait to read more =)