Omg wow just wow that was like one of the best stories I've ever fucking read it was like so perfect. It had like an amazing balance of really cute shot and angst and just omfg. I love it so much thanks for an ace story
Fucking incredible. Just... pure awesomeness. I will admit that I'm really, REALLY REALLY sad now (that ending was so unexpected! I'd actually thought for some reason that there'd still be like ten + chapters left!). But fuck. It's perfection. And I'm not sure if I can believe that you were only 13-15 years old when you wrote this story Seriously. You should have seen what I was writing at that age. Eesh.
Anyhow, thanks so much for this wonderful story. It had good times and I'll probably reread it someday, because the warp and meld of their minds is beautifully and realistically written. Keep writing, kid, you could go all sorts of places<3
Hi, ehm... I'm reading this fiction as a book for a schoolwork, but they need a name for the writer... Maybe I'm just bad at searching, but I can't seem to find your username either (I just signed up for this site). Could you maybe give me your full name, or just your firstname, and I can pretend that I know your last as well? Hehe, it would help out a lot!
Btw, I love it. It's so perfect, so good written and I love the way you write their characters. Keep on doing that <3
"I love you in the same way, there's a chapel in a hospital." ^ one of my favorite lyrics from any FOB song... I think this sits very well with how Frank is feeling! Forgot to mention that in my previous comment. Do you know what that lyric means?
Like, there's always a chapel in a hospital... meaning the love is always there? But it's convenient also? I don't know. I've always thought about it, and tried to decipher it, and have come up with nothing. That would have been a perfect question to ask Patrick when I met him a few years ago. DAMMIT.
THEY ARE ABOUT TO SEX, THEY ARE ABOUT TO SEX, THEY ARE ABOUT TO SEX!!!!!
AND IT'S RIGHT WHERE THEY NEED TO BE EMOTIONALLY, AND PERFECT JUST LIKE THEY ALWAYS HAVE BEEN, AND.... AND........ AHHHH!!! I am so fucking happy!!!!
This chapter was absolutely perfect. Gerard and Pete's discussion at the beginning was clarity that both of them needed, Frank telling Gerard that he loves Pete- but as a friend, not in the same way that he loves Gerard... that was what I think we all needed.
Mikey and Gerard bonding time was what we all needed too!!! It's about time that Gerard paid attention to his little brother. It was gorgeous.
And then Pete and Mikey. I love them so much. I appreciate how you wrote that scene in the diner, so much. Like, you made Mikey brave, to kiss Pete though he feels a certain way for Frank; and the conversation that followed... how Mikey is so brave. That's all he needed to hear! Keeping feelings all bottled up is so hard and will keep you suffocating and choking when all you want is to breathe. Communication is key and if you never try for something, you never will get it, no matter what the outcome may be. So... I feel that all is right in the worlds of all of these boys, ESPECIALLY down in the basement in Gerard's room, where Frank is on top of him, curing every one of both of their insecurities.
no frank, what the fuck, this is in no way going to end well, fuck poor gerard and just fuck! please update soon, and please don't be too mean to gerard, i mean if frank keeps up like this gerard will just kill himself and then no one will be happy
this chapter was perfect just like the others so don't be so hard on yourself. perrrfectt oh and drunk frank is sooo effing adorable I want more haha (but hmm I don't want him to actually drink any more cuz that's really bad for him but... hmm idek what I'm saying-_-)
you ave no reason to hate that chapter because it is lovely and i can't wait for your next update, you are seriously one of the best writters I've read lately and each chapter just leaves me on the edge!