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  • carolbbusin

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    where are you? :(
    November 26th, 2013 at 06:38pm
  • t0nyturtle_

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    Aww this is so cute. Cant wait for the next update! :)
    November 17th, 2013 at 09:23pm
  • steph goes rawr.

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    Aw I'm glad you updated! Can't wait to see what you have in store. Also love that you're throwing Spanish in there ;) xx
    November 3rd, 2013 at 11:09pm
  • carolbbusin

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    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww loving it! update soon please!
    October 27th, 2013 at 02:10pm
  • bb-8

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    Woo , they're gonna be partners!
    March 2nd, 2013 at 08:55pm
  • amariela

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    @ on your side;
    Omg thank you sooo much! Out of everyone's, your comment means the most to me so thank you! I have written before actually like back in 6th and 7th grade on a site called Quizilla but that was forever ago and I don't really think I was that good but basically yeah I've had practice. Thank you for pointing that grammar mistake out, I shall go hunt it down and fix it haha. I think I just get so caught up in my writing and the thoughts in my head can't keep up with my hands so I forget to type something or I say something I didn't mean blah blah blah. The next chapter I post will definitely be longer, I won't post it till it is (: Again thank you sooo much for your comment, it made my day! I won't disappoint youuu
    March 2nd, 2013 at 07:34pm
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    okay i saw your comment and came over here! be happy! (; okay, so, this isn't bad at all for your first story. like have your written before? because when i first started out i was the shittiest shit shit author ever! like even if you start back from the first story i posted here i was horrible! it's moving along at a proper pace and the grammar is almost perfect, every once in a while you use the wrong form of a word like "then" when it should be "than" like when you compare something? otherwise it's good. could be longer haha, but that's okay, we all have short chapters. overall i'm pretty impressed. i look forward to more of this. (:
    March 2nd, 2013 at 06:42pm
  • steph goes rawr.

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    I wonder what Tony's dad wants :0 Hopefully we find out soon!
    March 2nd, 2013 at 04:03am
  • carmengil

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    i feel so bad for Tony ): but i thinks his life will change with Daphne around.
    March 1st, 2013 at 07:24am
  • Stainedglasseye

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    Cliffhanger nooo.
    March 1st, 2013 at 04:46am
  • bb-8

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    haha, no prob!
    I doubt she's going to have a boyfriend for long :P And it seems as if she's already taken a liking to Tony.
    February 28th, 2013 at 05:56am
  • steph goes rawr.

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    I normally don't read PTV fics, but this is lovely. I love your details! Please update soon. :)
    February 28th, 2013 at 05:36am
  • dropdeadsebring

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    c: I like this already.
    February 28th, 2013 at 04:50am
  • amariela

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    @ d-o-c-t-o-r-w-h-o
    Aw you were my first comment. Thank you so much! (:
    February 28th, 2013 at 03:35am
  • bb-8

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    Definitely a good start. Curious to see where the story goes c:
    February 28th, 2013 at 01:33am