@ on your side; Omg thank you sooo much! Out of everyone's, your comment means the most to me so thank you! I have written before actually like back in 6th and 7th grade on a site called Quizilla but that was forever ago and I don't really think I was that good but basically yeah I've had practice. Thank you for pointing that grammar mistake out, I shall go hunt it down and fix it haha. I think I just get so caught up in my writing and the thoughts in my head can't keep up with my hands so I forget to type something or I say something I didn't mean blah blah blah. The next chapter I post will definitely be longer, I won't post it till it is (: Again thank you sooo much for your comment, it made my day! I won't disappoint youuu
okay i saw your comment and came over here! be happy! (; okay, so, this isn't bad at all for your first story. like have your written before? because when i first started out i was the shittiest shit shit author ever! like even if you start back from the first story i posted here i was horrible! it's moving along at a proper pace and the grammar is almost perfect, every once in a while you use the wrong form of a word like "then" when it should be "than" like when you compare something? otherwise it's good. could be longer haha, but that's okay, we all have short chapters. overall i'm pretty impressed. i look forward to more of this. (: