Torn - Comments

K, im on chapter 11 right now, if carlie takes any blame for this they should all just shoot themselves. This is the height of the problem with a patriarchal society. A woman in Iowa was fired from her job because he boss was "too tempted to cheat on his wife with her" and the iowa supreme court upheld it. I also enforces the idea that women are higher beings than men because men cant control themselves and women can keep their legs closed.

Lovely!! I read this story keeping up with your updates as you posted them. That was the first time! I just finished reading it again and loved every minute of it. You are an amazing writer!! Thank you for sharing your gift of writing.

I enjoyed this, read it all in one sitting..

So..... this story... yeah, it was pretty much epic. I absolutely loved it and can't wait to read some of your other stories! ! :-D

Aw so sad that it's over! But it was a great story :)

Yay on the Sidney Crosby story, please! :)

I really liked the part with Jordan "abusing" Charlotte. Not that he would actually do it, but it was just different.

Omg i couldn't stop laughing at how cute Olivia was in this...My friend swears by acer and she has nothing bad to say about them

Aww you skipped so much :(

Totally did not see that coming!!!

Please tell me your doing a sequal

Aw that was so cute! I love how he made her say it over and over again :)

I have no words to express my happiness for this chapter!!!! Absoluincredfantaswondeawesome!!!!

I came across this story today and read all 43 chapters this evening. I love the story line and I feel you are doing a great job. Don't let the negativity get you down. :)

Love the update and don't let the haters get you down!

I. Love. Your. Writing. I give you permission to make as many mistakes in a day as I do. So that's def a green light cause I make tons every single day. Keep exercising that writers muscle. That's how your writing stays so strong:) So please keep writing:)

psst: the flu is caused by a virus, it's not a bacterial thing so they don't give antibiotics for it. They may give antibiotics if the flu causes a secondary bacterial infection, like pneumonia.

Yay! You're back! I absolutely loved this. Jordan is just the cutest father, but I feel bad that he feels like an absentee father :(

Jebus, Tanya at this beginning of chapter 41 is a piece of work. As a parent, I cannot imagine why another parent would treat so badly someone with whom she entrusts her children. I mean seriously, Tanya, the woman is taking care of your children when you are not there. Their lives are in her hands for hours and days. Literally in her hands. And you badmouth the woman? You question her care, you question her morality, you imply she's a slut, you question the parentage of her child? You make faces at her and laugh at her? I just cannot imagine treating so poorly someone who is caring in my absence for those I love so dearly. It's just so short-sighted to piss off upon whom you depend to care for your children.

Aw that was cute! I can't to see the interesting stuff you have planned :)