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  • Kira Yukimura

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    this has been sitting open in a tab since I got home from school why did I wait so long to read it it's pERFECT OMG

    feels :c
    February 27th, 2013 at 07:50pm
  • Stjornugangr

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    Oh Jesus. This is beautiful
    February 27th, 2013 at 06:12pm
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    Pukes a rainbow of molten gold this is perfect
    February 27th, 2013 at 05:10pm
  • nearly witches.

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    I really like this. The description that you've used is lovely, really simple and fitting for the topic itself. You give enough depth for us to paint a picture in our minds, but leave more than enough room for our imaginations to roam free, which is great. I haven't seen anyone take Sean Smith and put him into a story with this angle, so really well done on the originality of the plot. Even though it's quite short, you get all of the details. I love the fact that the reaper isn't the usual guy in a black cloak, and I think you bring both Tessa and Sean's characters over really well, especially in such a short space of time.

    In short, I think this is a gorgeous little piece. Well done!
    February 27th, 2013 at 03:50pm
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