She Has the Best Life. - Comments

@ eminems_stan93
Aww thankyou, that means quite a lot as I didn't think anyone thought it was good. Love your name btw, love eminem! Thankyou for reading and I will keep posting:p

I'm kind of adding to the comment by the comment down below in this... I actually really like this, I'm not usually into unreaslistic stories especially fanfics, but I don't mind it once in a while. I tend to keep my fanfics fairly realistic- obviously cos their fanfics some things are made up and whatever. I can't detect all of the spelling and stuff because i have dylexia but I do know a lot of reader (particulary if you go through comment swap) will bitch about it. It might be a good idea to still try and edit. It doesn't bother me though :) Otherwise, I'm hooked, keep updating.

Right well I understand where your coming from but I did put that's its a fantasy story therefore it is made up and should not sound realistic. I'm not the best speller - sorry - but thanks for reading

I think you need to go back and edit this out, I've found way too many spelling erros I can't remember all of them. It doesn't flow and I'm not sure of where this is going, it seems pretty unrealistic too. The custom layout makes the text squashed up and it's very hard to read. You don't need to mention theres course language in the status bar because by the rating we as readers should expect a few swear words. I'm not hating just thought I'd give you some tips...