Oh that was so cute! I love the email names and that you actually thought to make the serves different so it wasn't all just one email provider.
I love the way it was made to be an ema instead of just a story. It was different. Different is good. I like different.
His poor girlfriend, though, finding out over email, ouch. And the reasons where just perfect. The last line where he did his ps, I laughed out loud. That was just adorable. This Connor kid, SURPRISE!
I don't know if this is a oneshot or not, but I'd definitely like to see how the email is perceived.
Oh my god... the last three things on the list. I enjoy your writing so much. It's so fun and playful yet can have a serious tone. I absolutely LOVE that you formatted this into an e-mail style chapter because I love seein stuff like that. It's so different and a refresher from the same old same old paragraph paragraph paragraph paragraph the end type of thing. It gives a nice visual effect to the story, it truly does. I read a series of books (the first one was called The Year My Life Went Down the Loo) that were stylized in an email format and it was so fun to read. That series remains as one of my favorites just because it was different like that! I know that not all of the story is probably going to be like this, but obvi this is all I have to go on so I'm going to fan girl about it. The ending cracked me up. The part where he says he thinks Conner is hot made me lose my shit. I can only imagine the reactions of these people as they read this "accidentally" sent email. Please, update soon! ❤
Please let there be more chapters of this soon. I'm really want to see how this story plays out. You're quickly becoming a favorite author of mine. I love your writing style.
Hahahahaha, oh my god I loved this. Naturally, I loved Fransisco Lachowski in the banner But I just thought this was hilarious. It was so satirical but witty and I loved how brazen it was. I also loved the ending, when you repeated and bolded the boobs to really emphasise your point. And the game comment was just brilliant. And then the PS literally made me laugh out loud. I also love Connor’s email
There should be more stories like there like these. And if there are, if you could point me in the direction of those that would be amazing