Ever since the Twilight thing became so popular and the 98552545 vampire related things after that, I've been trying to stay as far away as possible from blood suckers I'm glad this story was pleasant to read even for me
On a serious note, though, your writing style is quite lovely, you were able to paint a picture with such a small amount of words.
Also, props for writing in a fandom that doesn't get much love on Mibba. You even made vampires interesting in this x)