Pieces. - Comments

Oh wow, I'm about a year too late.
I like this a lot, I wish there would be more.

omg i fucking love this!
is ther going to be more? update soon pretty pretty please.
xoox

I really love this story, i read all of it that's up so far at once, and usually I take my time, and am lazy as all hell. but I really love this. There's nothing to ConCrit, at the moment, so much love. <3
Danii Christina

I love updates.
This chapter is awesome :D
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Yay! Me!
*celebrates*
I'm so proud of myself haha.
xo

I think it's neat that you have Gerard's POV now; it's going to be useful telling his side of the story. Your writing flows together really nicely; if I hadn't of read the authors note, I would have assumed that the same author had written it. So good job on that.
I love how appreciative Gerard seemed to be; it must have been a little bit shocking and you captured his emotions well.
So, good job on the chapter, both of you! (:

Awesome update.

I really liked reading this from MCR's point of view, and I loved the way you described Bert & Quinn :]

That chapter was so fuckign awesome.
Considering it was written by another writer it fits in really well but its not so much that Gerard and Bert sound exactly the same which would be bad.
I liked reading it basically the same as the previous one but in another POV because its like looking on both sides of the mirror kinda thing.

I don't think mirror is the right word...

Oh well!

Awesome. More soon i hope :)

xxxx

I was gonna ask you for another update...but I just realised you've only really just updated....but can't we just have a little one!?

This is a really interesting story!

I'm not really a fan of The Used or MCR but I'm definitely going to follow this. It sounds so interesting and I really want to know what happens! :D

Aww, TU are all nice :)
I like smiles.

Nice update, it was worth the wait (Y).

YAY!
I feel special now :D

Aww bless, Bert is so head over heels for Gee he's spinning all over the place.
That doesn't make sense but this was an insane chapter so who carese XD

Baton. I think those stick things are called.

I love this story its so cute :D

xxx

Ekk! It was well worth the wait. Hope we get more soon. I really enjoyed reading it! x]

love it!
moree soon

OMG, :cheese:
This is like... ah, it's almost impossible to say anything.
There's just...something about it - regardless of the fact that it's just the beginning.
I'm like...super hooked.

[and I will give a totally better review later, I promise.]

love you..

I love it so far!! It's great. I love finding stories that try to explain the fallout. I love both Gerard and Bert, and I really wish they would explain everything and give us a solid reason. It seems a real waste; they were such great friends. I love your spin on it so far, and I can't wait to read more. You've goten me hooked on your writing style, too. It's great. Definitely subscribing. =]

I didn't finish all my ice cream - I'll give you 1/2 back if we can have another update?! Please

awww...Bert in a nice light! I <3 it! can I get ice cream now? I'm even subscribing!

ahhh you are speical Bert :D

I love this story!! All of them seem really real and like how i would expect them to be. Yay for Bert's infactuation with Gerard. Twill be hot i can tell :D
Its weird cos i felt tired after reading that as well as I C G P did... just proves how influencial your writing is. XD

Update when you can :D

xxx