Welcome, to the World of Pokemon. - Comments

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This isn't bad, but I really wish you'd get the story rolling. There's not much I can say off of just one chapter and I'm exactly sure were this stories going to go. Which I guess is a good thing, to keep the reader guessing. Another thing is your layout. You don't have one. Layouts can help add to your story and give the reader a sort of feel for how the story might be. Kind of like the way a cover works for a book. Anyway, this was well written and I could easily picture everything going on in my mind. Good job and update soon :3

This isn't a bad start to the story. It's a little dramatic that Caerlyn wanted to kill herself, but still, it's a nice start. Um there isn't much else to say except for you have an unique writing style. :)