Abbarent Waters - Comments

this is so eloquently written. whats up with her dad? this is all so lovely. i can't wait for more.

what's wrong with her father?? ): i have a feeling he's sick. i thought he might be cheating at first but i don't think elena is the type of girl to keep that a secret. he must be sick or dying. the letter gone though!! wtf!!

This is so beautiful. Elena is so delicate and empathetic. This whole story seems spooky. I'm so glad you're writing again!!

I've missed you so much, I hope you know that. This was as gorgeous as always! I love how you described everything, it's so detailed and eloquent, despite the actual content being quite nauseating.

Mom moved faster than I’d ever seen any pregnant woman move and leaned over the sink, her whole body lurching forward as she threw up the contents of her last meal. I turned my head with my nose wrinkled up in disgust. Jackson watched her with excitement, as if throwing up was cool.

Like this, for instance. I've subscribed and recommended this, it's lovely. :3

beautiful written. i'm so glad youre back. you have no idea!!!!!!!!

I LOVE THIS. WOW. THIS IS GOING TO BE AWESOME.

the description and layout are really spooky! it seems like this story might be kind of spooky too.... i cant wait! i really like elena so far.