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This is so interesting. Please update soon! I love this already.

The imagery in this and the descriptive/emotive language has me falling over in my chair. Matt as a supernatural hunter fuck. There goes my emotions, flying out of the window. Just shit.. I really love this!

@ xXxMCRsavedmexXx
No, thank you for reading, commenting and for enjoying :D

I love how with what you've written, we find out quite a bit but, for me at least, I still don't quite know. This is definitely one of those rare stories where you have to wait and keep reading to see how past and future alike rolls out in a mesh of calculated words and scenes. Love the idea of the story, there's so much I want to say about this but I'm just not sure how to word it - same with the majority of your writing - another great story I can't wait read more of. I adore your descriptions and attention to detail. The way you dont just write - he did this, then this, and then this - it makes you work and think about how and why and its all so very amazing. You are a fantastic writer. Thank you for writing and sharing this I can't wait to see what happens! :D

Amazing update, hun! I love it muchly. :)

@ Synful Shadows
I'm thinking you'll probably like the next chapter then
And as to Matt being like you know who, it was mostly how he got all "that wasn't a request" and demanding and shit. You'll see when he who must not be named, comes into it and Matt gets his ass handed to him

Seriously? This teasing is fucking getting to me. I really thought this was going to be sexy time. I still love the teasing though and that it's not rushed. I just hate the anticipation. I'm kind of wondering what exactly the history Loki has with you know who. (Trying to not give spoilers here. It's kind of hard when I know little tidbits.) The little comment he made about Matt being just like him has got me really curious, especially since I'm assuming it was supposed to be a bad thing. And Matt's been attacked now. Thank goodness Loki was there to help, even if he wasn't full of answers for Matt. I'm wondering how long the attacks will continue before Matt finds out the truth though. Can't wait for more! :D

MOAR

I love this story so much. I want to hug it. I love the way Loki constantly teases Matt. I love how descriptive it is. Extremely well written. Can't wait for more! I am now going to go and stalk your page

Synful Shadows:

Just saying that I'm having a love/hate relationship with this chapter. Love for the fact that there was some amazing action in here and the fact that it didn't make it all the way, but hate for the fact that it didn't go any further haha. I mean, I'm glad it didn't. It's still too soon, and obviously Matt isn't ready for it since he was thinking of Brian. By the way, I'm feeling a little guilty for rooting for some Matt/Loki smexy time, even if Brian isn't in the picture anymore. It feels kind of wrong haha, but I'm still so frustrated that things were just left hanging like that. I'm going to go be all angsty elsewhere now. I did love this though.

She said it perfectly. :D Loki/Matt is definitely an interesting pairing, but I love what you have!

.....just waiting for the action to continue...lol

Just saying that I'm having a love/hate relationship with this chapter. Love for the fact that there was some amazing action in here and the fact that it didn't make it all the way, but hate for the fact that it didn't go any further haha. I mean, I'm glad it didn't. It's still too soon, and obviously Matt isn't ready for it since he was thinking of Brian. By the way, I'm feeling a little guilty for rooting for some Matt/Loki smexy time, even if Brian isn't in the picture anymore. It feels kind of wrong haha, but I'm still so frustrated that things were just left hanging like that. I'm going to go be all angsty elsewhere now. I did love this though.

Two of my favourite things in one story - I am so subscribed to this it's not even funny. =P

I think this has been a really interesting start, and I'm looking forward to reading more.

@ Brian Haner Jr
It's what I'm here for.

Holy crap! Thanks! I'd edited it so many time I didn't even pick up on it! Thanks for letting me know, I'll fix it now!!

Oh, now the fun's really going to start with Loki in the mix now. (I hope that wasn't some sort of spoiler for anybody that reads the comments.) I'm just curious to see how this plays out, with their personalities mixing and whatnot. It'll at least be a distraction for Matt hopefully. I definitely hate seeing him hurting so much. I think that covers everything I can think of to write, other than I loved it, but that's a given haha.

Oh, by the way, second paragrah, second sentence, "He shouted, straightened in his seat and slammed on the breaks." Breaks should be brakes. I think you did it at least one more time. It's just kind of bugging me, and I figured you might want to know.

this is PERFECTTTTTT

This is still so perfect. I absolutely love Matt, even if he is in pain, and I can just picture him perfectly. I can even picture the exact way he holds himself without that even being told. And I just love the Supernatural tie in with this. Now just to see where exactly you end up taking this.

ok.
i'm kind of upset.
because i knew nothing of this.
at all.
ever.
so why?
tell me Y U NO TELL ME BOUT THIS?!

but i'll get over my little episode because this is awesome and lovely and wonderful and i love it.

ooooo :3 A supernatural/Matt Sanders fanfic. I simply cannot refuse! I think it is wonderful, and different to what you usually write, which is awesome. Supernatural, being my favourite show, ever, and along with M.Shadows? Now there's a fic I am going to enjoy goddamn reading :3
Keep it up hun! :)