Wild One - Comments

Chapter 13:

Goddamn, you go girl!

@ Mrs. Whirly
I'm so happy you enjoyed the story as much as you did! And I'm flattered you'll think of it when you hear the song. Thank you for reading and for your comment; it means a lot to me! xx

P.s. Wild One is my second favorite song by Green Day, after Christie Road, and now every time I hear that song I will be thinking of this story. Hope that isn't too weird but it's the truth.

This story was so beautiful. Even though I didn't want her to and that I hoped she would overcome and be happy, I'm glad that she died in the end...even if that sounds a tad bit morbid. I mean, it made it full circle. This was so beautifully written and I just...cried a lot at the end. This is a great story and one that I will stay subscribed to just in case I want to read it again. Thank you for writing it.

@fall0ut No problem, I wouldn't post it anywhere without your permission, that's why I was asking :]

@ poison and blood
babe ily

@ WhereMyDemonsHide
Thank you :)

@ lazy-bones
Haha I'll have to consider it!

@ Kuro0105
I am so honoured that you think that way. I'm happy you liked it! Thank YOU for taking the time to read it and enjoy it. <3 xo

@ Join the Masquerade
Aw, thank you so much. I'm happy my story made you feel something, even if they weren't the happiest of feelings. Thank you for reading it and connecting to it like that. That's all a writer can ask for in this world. You're amazing!

@ Doctormik
Thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed it! And I'm very flattered that you think it's deserving of that praise, but I'll have to politely decline your offer. It just wouldn't feel right to have my work posted elsewhere by someone else with or without my permission. But thank you, and I know you meant that with good intentions. I do appreciate the thought. :)

@ Crystal2
I'm happy it was real to you! Thanks for reading!

@ stylish zebras x
Thank you for reading it. <3

@ punkrockandhockey
I'm so happy you liked it and that it evoked some emotion in you as a reader. That means a lot to me! Thanks for reading. <3

Tears and more tears after finishing this story. That's not just because it's over but also for the way you wrote this story and how emotional it was. This story is so unique and even though it ended sadly I really loved reading it.

Thank you so much for writing and posting this story :)

That was so beautiful and sad and just thank you for posting this story!

lazy-bones:

NOW ITS TIME FOR THE SEQUEL WHERE GRACE DIDNT ACTUALLY DIE AMD SHE AND BILLIE LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER.

Okay? Okay. I'll be here, waiting. :''''''D

I must agree :D I shall wait too :)

I really liked this story a lot, and I loved the relationship Billie had with Grace. It was so real :D

This is hands down one of the best stories I've ever read. Beautifully written, amazing original characters, and tremendous plot. And... I have a question for you: can I translate your story into italian and post it on the biggest italian fanfiction site? Obviously I'd post it with a new account under your username, and link the original story in the translation.

I held it all in right up to that very last line and now I'm just sitting here at 4AM, bawling my eyes out with "Wild One" playing in my head on repeat.

That was such a well-rounded story. I really really appreciate that you chose to share it with the world. I couldn't believe how suddenly Grace died. She just... left. All in one chapter, yet across every one of them. And it hurt much more than it would have if it had been dragged out until the end.

I'm so angry with Billie Joe for not picking up on the LSD sooner. I'm so angry at him for not taking her to another doctor and getting a blood test or something to confirm his thoughts about her shady doctor. And it feels absolutely horrible because those are the thoughts he's now stuck with for the rest of forever.

Thank you for ending it in the park by the tree. I was hoping for that, if it had to come to that. So well written. Thanks for making me cry and giving me a new story to think about when I listen to another Green Day song <3 xx

Edit:
Just popped back in to say that I think what bothers me the most after reading this is this feeling that I want so badly for someone to understand me as Billie Joe understood Rachel Grace. So beautiful.

It's a pity that this story is over! But it was so amazing! I started reading it when you first posted it! I am a huge fan of your Art! Yes, THIS is art! Something amazing. And you touched me in so many ways with this story! I am sure I'll never forget it!

But I am so happy that you'll start a new story! I cant wait! :)
Thank you that you allowed us to dive into this world with you!! <3

NOW ITS TIME FOR THE SEQUEL WHERE GRACE DIDNT ACTUALLY DIE AMD SHE AND BILLIE LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER.

Okay? Okay. I'll be here, waiting. :''''''D

That was beautiful :)

I am so done with you right now. I am so done.
I still love you tho.
But nevertheless, I am done.

Omgggggg that's my Billie <3

That was a-fucking-mazing! You can really feel Billies hurt over Grace and you anticipate him going after Steinberg. I wouldn't change a thing. It's really beautiful and is now my favorite Billie fanfic. It's so beautiful how it's written and really sad as well. I loved it so much!

So many tears right now. You write this story so well that it makes people attached to it. Honestly I feel so bad for Billie and he doesn't deserve to feel that way. At least the Doctor got what he deserved.

I was hoping maybe Grace was alive, just barely, and they had her hooked up to a million machines in a hospital and Billie was praying she'd be ok... but, yeah, she's definitely not gonna survive a fall like that ;( Glad Steinberg got his (and I'm soooo glad Billie didn't kill him).
Excited for the next chapter!

I just want Grace to come back. ;_; Good thing Steinberg is getting what he deserved, though. And as much as I don't want the story to end, I'm really excited for the last chapter (as long as it's sweet and not depressing like this one and the last one Dx).

Don't keep us waiting! :D