Breech - Comments

This update was really good ^_^ Go him for standing up for her. Hmm, I think he's just hoping it's a boy. Can't wait to read more :)

AHHHH WHY DO YOU HAVE TO END LIKE THIS this is AMAZING PLEASE write more I'm begging you this is so perfect Brennan is so wonderful. You are such an amazing writer

I love this. I love how her and brennan have been bestfriends forever. For me that is real love.

I'm going to be honest because you said your looking for comments. I think you have a pretty interesting story going here I think you just really need to read over it and check for spelling mistakes every time you finish writing and you'll be good :). Also when you first start a story you usually don't get a lot of comments because people are trying to get the hang of it (if you know what I mean) so you should keep writing (preferably longer chapters so its worth every read) and then more people will see it on the story news feed and you'll attract more readers as you go therefore getting more comments :). I personally love where your going with this cause i love the whole best friend relationship turned sexy lol I just sometimes get distracted by the spelling errors. Hope you continue :)

I really like it and hope you continue it. :)

@Zombiesloveme Thank you :)

I really like it so far! :D your a great writer! :)