Oh my God, this is amazing. It's so clever and smart and funny, and already I'm in love with Isaac and Anthony because their chemistry is hilariously real. It's quirky without being gimmicky and everything just comes across as genuine. The plot is so fresh along with the way you handle it, and I'm totally subscribing! Can't wait to read more!! :)
Well hells bells, this is fantastic. I love it. I never would have thought of a kid who felt he had to finish things before he died. I guess that'll kind of rule out him being a ghost in the after life. It'd suck to be sent back to earth to roam around because you didn't pick up all of the candy and cough drop papers off your floor. I really love Isaac's character. He seems so... so. Like everything HAS to be done or executed a certain way or he'll freak. I like that because I'm similar. I seriously love this story so much already. I hope you keep up with it!
And it's sort of really fucking weird, because he doesn't dream of death; he dreams of living. He's dreaming of walking his dog (that he doesn't have), holding hands with the ambiguous hand of Seriously Are You a Boy or a Girl, and even of just carrying out activities. Like drawing, cooking, doing his taxes... All things he doesn't know how to do
HOO FUCKING RAY!!! It's alive!! So fucking excited! And I got the update for Gargantuan Clusterfuck in the middle of reading this so I guess I'll be reading that next. I'm so fucking happy it's not even funny (she says while commenting on a story about suicide)!! Ah!!
Also... Er, just throught I'd point out what I would assume is a typo. Not to be a bitch but since there were no other typos but this, in the last paragraph, it says Isaac grunts at something Isaac says. Wouldn't it be Anthony who says that chivalry is dead? I feel bad pointing that out...
Anywho, yay! Update! I'll be waiting for more, ya hear!!