New World - Comments

@ Katie Mosing
Oh, thats a shame, I never got to read the others :/ I loved reading what you guys wrote though :)

@ Run.Away
All of the other authors backed out so maddi and I just finished it together

I'm curious as to what happened to this story?

I like Elena, she is a very likeable character and you show how trapped she is without alienating her from the readers. It’s written very well. All of the characters are written well, although they seem similar in some aspects however it adds to the connection to the story.
Corey’s connection to her father was heart-warming, it found it very emotional to read. Jasmine is an adorable character, I like that Zayn thinks of her before thinking of a relationship, it make the story realistic. Mila also seems like an interesting character, her back story with the fiancé that died could be very interesting. Darcy and Harry seem to have a cute friendship, although their introductions seemed more about this than the actual characters. I really like Lola, I like the thought process she seems to follow and how she is looking for something outside of routine.
I like that I could completely forget it was a fan-fiction, especially as I’m not a One Direction fan.
Atello sounds lovely, except for the death.

This story is freaking amazing!
I love Elena always sneaking out and now Liam has to try to stop her! He's going to have quite the task on his hands!
Coraline and Niall are so fun! They have like total opposite personalities and they're so funny to watch when he was an the shop.
I feel so bad for Mila and Zayn! They both lost someone to the dino attack! But Jasmine is just too precious.
Harry and Darcy are freaking adorable. I love friendships that turn into romances. Those are my favorites.
Louis and Lola got their first date! Did anyone else notice it's Lo and Lo?! I don't know how to make a ship name!

Okay Elena and Liam are too freaking cute to handle! I'm going to get diabetes over here. When he followed her out into the woods I was just dying! It was the cutest thing ever! I love that he just wants to protect her and not let her get hurt but she's trying to be independent. Such a classic love story with a freaking awesome twist!

Get well soon Katie <3 Mibba loves you!

I loved that!
Liam and Elena are so cute :3

Wow, I've seen this story a few times, promoted it, and thought how interesting it probably was. It truly is amazing. o_o I'm loving these AU stories that you guys have created. Atello sounds very neat. Dinosaurs, woooow. Sooo cool. I can't blame Elena, I would be fighting my father tooth and nail to be able to go out on an adventure.
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The whole deathbed thing is so sad. That whole line presses my feels buttons.

Lol, awe, Zayn and her are too cute. This is an awesome story.

Lola's subconscious is amusing.
I loved that chapter!

Harry is so precious in this.
I loved that chapter!

Mila and Zayn are so cute. I can't wait until they get together!
I loved that update, Erin!

Ohh, Niall.. pushing Coraline's buttons haha.
I loved that chapter! (:

I loved the little bit of interaction between Elena and Liam.
I liked that chapter! (:

Mila and Zayn so cute and Darcy and Harry oh lawdy

I liked that update!
And thanks for getting that cover song stuck in my head haha.

Darcy and Harry are cute (:

Darcy and Harry are precious!! This is too much for me! Can you just imagine him being all studious with his science stuff and just too much feels sadkflha.

Brilliant as always, Erin. Zayn seems really sweet in this! And I kind of chuckled this his daughter's name is Jasmine.
I can't wait for the next update!

I loved that chapter! I can't wait to read the next one (:

I can already see Elena as my favorite!! she seems so fun!
Corlaine seems like a total badass! All her machinery and such!