You should write more on this. This was an awesome story and I want to know what happened. Its a mixture between hopelessness insanity and hopelessly in love :)
@ xxmikkiscarxx Thank you, and don't worry, it will stay original I enjoy tragedies too, mainly because real life doesn't always have happy endings. I wanted to capture the beauty of something that could be so horrible. I guess I'm doing it right.
I'm commenting again :) I'm going to write, what seems to be a very large paragraph, so brace yourself.. I think this story is fascinatingly depressing with a hint of romance. This love story is so tragic yet beautiful yet terrible and you've captured my attention which isn't so easily won. I think you've done an amazing job. this story is awesome :D Don't want to sound cruel here or sadistic ._. but I freaking love stories with a tragedy and I hate it when the writers abide by the commentator's suggestions and drift the story into a predictable plot. word of advice, you should keep it original..I think that's what makes stories really cool. :) I look forward to reading some more or any other of your future, new, whatever stories.
its a good story. update soon. i cant decide if its a love story or a tragedy. i'm very interested whether he will actually die or still live bc he's found in time.
@ EonInfinity Just when I get bored lolololol. I want to get it finished before I lose interest. That tends to happen a lot with my stories, especially if they are too long. It was a sudden inspiration, and It keeps flowing :)