This story was so good! I was squirming at the uncomfortable parts and freaking out with all the drama. It was so original too! I loved it!! Thank you for sharing it!
This story is full of twists and turns and I think that's what keeps me reading it. I just can't ever guess what's going to happen next and it's packed full of drama.
I'm so glad that Louis and Marie were at least able to have one moment of bliss together before everything fell apart. As awful as James was for filming Marie without her knowledge, I feel like it's not a surprise at all. He's been disgusting all the way through the story and when he was nice to her I knew he had ulterior motives. You do such a great job at making me feel for both Louis and Marie. On one hand I have a lot of sympathy for Louis because of how heartbreaking that video had to be. I agree with Louis that Marie should've gone to him for that and it would've made her first at least special and with someone who loves her. But Marie is so likeable and sweet and a little naive that I dislike Louis for not letting her explain. As mad as he was, he should've never called her a whore.
But that last chapter I'm really looking forward to what you have in store for this. I'm really rooting for Marie to finally be able to start a new life out of the porn industry. I just don't know how easy it will be for her without someone eventually noticing who she really is.
Marie Marie Marie. Big mistake doing that with James. She totally should've known he'd do something like that. I'll comfort Louis. I don't shag guys on film hahahaha I love this story!
I'm typically not a fan of Louis stories because I feel like authors go overboard on making him sassy so I'm truly surprised to say how much I enjoy this. Not only is it such an original concept having him fall for a porn star, but it's so refreshing to see Louis be this sweet, loving guy and not always cracking jokes or making a snarky comment. He's genuinely caring and romantic and I just adore that.
That said, I kind of feel bad for Marie because I feel like she would like to do more with Louis, but he's so determined to prove to her she's worth more than just sex that he doesn't see she wants him because she knows he likes her for the right reasons.
And James. Oh, James. What a piece of work. Him and Cody, they're both awful for how they view Marie as an object they can use and blackmail into sleeping with them. I seriously hope she doesn't take the movie deal.