You're My Favorite Explosion. - Comments

  • Jefferson Starships

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    I felt for Colin a little. But even with Alex being a dick, he's got a pretty sweet deal going on there. His big brother's in a famous band, he gets to tour with him, that sounds great! And now Alex is his secret boyfriend too, well that's just unfair! I really liked this. Stories with that bit of "unacceptable" love always catch me. I didn't see or remember any mistakes, so your grammar and spelling was way better than other things I've read. You did a great job, really!
    July 9th, 2013 at 12:17am
  • Unexpected.

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    This was fantastic. You're writing style is really good!
    March 16th, 2013 at 03:55pm
  • FallenCreature

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    Aww, this is adorable xD
    I love how Collin's picture is James Cheal! I love that guy (;
    March 16th, 2013 at 01:49pm
  • early_graves

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    Hello! So I just wanted to say that the picture for Collin is really hot. But anyways, I really love the story line. I love slash, and I haven't read too many where it's a guy and then a band member. So, that's always a plus. I love how you put insight into Collin's head, which I always love. It's better than a ton of dialog and you had the perfect amount of dialog. I really enjoyed this :)
    March 8th, 2013 at 11:20pm