I felt for Colin a little. But even with Alex being a dick, he's got a pretty sweet deal going on there. His big brother's in a famous band, he gets to tour with him, that sounds great! And now Alex is his secret boyfriend too, well that's just unfair! I really liked this. Stories with that bit of "unacceptable" love always catch me. I didn't see or remember any mistakes, so your grammar and spelling was way better than other things I've read. You did a great job, really!
July 9th, 2013 at 12:17am