A Lot on My Plate - Comments

Can I relate to this, yes. I like the idea behind this story, eating disorders are always interesting. The first half of the story feels a little bit rushed and awkward. She hates her body, she is disgusted with it and I would like to hear her rant about it a little bit more. I think it would be more realistic.Now the last paragraph is magnificent, it pulls in the reader; it makes him want to read more.

Overall, I believe that this is going to turn out to be a great story.

Also, I just wanted to say that I really understand Riley and Megan's friendship. I have a friend that is crazy skinny (and wouldn't you know it, on the cheer team) and everyone knows her, and here I am, in Riley's position. Like I said, so so relatable.

I really love this idea. It's actually incredibly relatable. I wanna read more!

This is a awesome beginning! I can't wait to see where you'll take it. Eating storys always interest me as I used to have one. Still fighting it. Anyway good job. I subscribed :D

This is actually brilliant. I am a recovering bulimic and anything having to with EDs is close to my heart. Your writing is mature and effortless and very relateable. I subbed and rec'd it! I look forward to much more!