That was a very wonderful chapter. Poor Eden doesn't know that she's probably more than just a onetime fling to Dan. I don't think she is anyways. I can't wait until the next update :D
I promised myself I wouldn't read another 50 Shades of Grey inspired fan fiction after reading 50 Shades of Flintceschi, but this one is so well written & this time it's het, so I'm gonna give this one a chance. I really like how this is going & I can't wait until the next update :D