Oh, this is great! The piece of writing in the summary was a brilliant introduction to the story, which made the first chapter/flashback quite heartbreaking. I'm really excited about how you're going to write this and where the story is going to led us. Your writing is well-written and I have a strong feeling this story is going to be a really good one. With just a flashback for the first chapter, it's great so far and I can't wait to read more!