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  • actuallycapamerica

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    Oh, this is great! Although your paragraphs are insanely long, I liked the story so far. It's quite confusing though, not knowing their background, but I guess that will be solved in future chapters? Anyways, can't wait for more chapters! Update soon! <3
    April 9th, 2013 at 06:45am
  • SpencerG

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    That's awesome!!! It all makes sense now! *grins*
    March 16th, 2013 at 11:40pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    So cute. Sorry that I didn't reply sooner, but hey I'm relying now, right? Anyways, this was too cute. I LOVE Niall. And this story makes me giggle and feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
    Update soon?
    March 12th, 2013 at 10:58pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    HAHAHHA. I totally forgot that I made this layout, so I was like, "WHOA, that's a pretty picture of Niall." And then I was like, "Oh, yeah, I found that." WHOOPS.

    AP classes... UGHHHH. AP classes and I have SUCH a bad relationship right now. Hahaha.

    This chapter is so cute! I think it's adorable how she won the contest, and how they're like, "Oh, no, there's no way Niall will even look at me." AWKWARD 'CAUSE WE KNOW HE DOES. ;)

    And I'm glad you like the layout. :D

    HAAA. That's a long author's note? Then mine are novels. Hahaha.
    March 12th, 2013 at 02:33am
  • bxgurl95

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    I love the premise of this story! Not many people can write a good Niall story or a good story for that matter. I like that we know there's drama coming up but also get to see their past and how they got together. But also even in the present time there's a lot you can do. Can't wait for more :)
    March 12th, 2013 at 02:12am
  • DaniGates

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    That was lovely dear! I love how she was able to meet them. I can't wait for more :D
    March 12th, 2013 at 12:44am
  • DaniGates

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    Oh my gosh! That was like the cutest thing I ever read! Seriously, you give me feels. Like the intense feels. The feels that could kill! I love love loveeeedddd this babe! It's too bad it's not a full length or at least a two part one-shot. lol. Because they have those. haha! Fantastic job! And you are SO write about love. It is just magical. Ugh. Love it! :D Okay. I'm gonna go cry now. Lol :D
    March 10th, 2013 at 06:57am
  • sandrashameless

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    @ Kelseylynnf
    i really liked it! i'm interested in what happened before lol
    March 9th, 2013 at 04:13pm
  • SpencerG

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    That was so magical and fluffy that I wanna go to the park while its snowing and make out with somebody cute. *flails arms*
    March 9th, 2013 at 03:19pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Awe. I love this and since it's about Niall, I love it even more. Too bad it's only one shot!!! :)
    March 9th, 2013 at 03:12pm
  • Kelseylynnf

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    @ sandrashameless
    It's funny you say that because I was considering making this into a chapter story! Lol. What do you think? :) thank you for reading and commenting! Means the world :)
    March 9th, 2013 at 07:46am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    @ bxgurl95
    Thank you, thank you, thank you!! That means a lot! I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed it :)
    March 9th, 2013 at 07:45am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    @ onlythegooddieyoung
    I had the flashback part in italics but when I copied & pasted it the italics wasn't showing up for some reason. Lol. But thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it :)
    March 9th, 2013 at 07:44am
  • bxgurl95

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    It's descriptive and detailed yet sweet and sincere. Thouugh there isn't much character devlopment her thoughts and emotions are on the line and define the story. I really loved this as a one shot and it's like a snapshot of a day of their lives. Bravo!
    March 9th, 2013 at 06:36am
  • sandrashameless

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    whyyyyy is it just a one shot?!
    March 9th, 2013 at 05:14am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Awww, this was incredibly adorable!

    There were some grammar things here and there, but nothing that really affected my ability to read and understand the story.

    And just a stylistic note, instead of doing "Flashback:" and then putting the scene, putting into italics would give the same message. :)

    But this was very well done, and I enjoyed it very much. ^_^
    March 9th, 2013 at 04:26am
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