Believe in Me - Comments

Soo good hopefully there's some drama!!!! Can't wait

Loved the update!!! I hope Rachel comes back to chicago soon and things work out bw lilly and patrick! Update asap!

Loved the update!!

I KNEW ADAM WAS GONNA BE MATT BOMER I HAD A FEELING. LOVED THE UPDATE

update!!!!!!

thank god u updated!!! I love this story so much and can't wait for more!!!

please update soon!!!

Re: Ch. 15. I'm sorry, but if she knew that he rarely used condoms and she didn't want to be pregnant, maybe she should have been using contraception, not sleeping with him, or at least being familiar with her cycle and her fertility. And if he didn't want to get her pregnant, why wasn't he using condoms or making sure she was using contraception? This is something basic that all couples need to discuss at the very beginning!

Ch. 16, I love how Kaner is the voice of responsibility and maturity, not Jon. That's awesome. I know Kane can be a screwup but I suspect that once he actually grows up he's gonna be a badass family guy. I mean, look how much he loves his sisters and his mom. Someday he's going to realize that all girls are someone's daughter/sister/maybe even mom. And if/when he has kids, he is going to be all over the dad thing.

Great update! Sad to see Jon like that, hope things work out! Glad to see Lilly and Pat sorted things out :)

I love this story. Please say that they work it out soon :)

I can't wait for those other chapters. I love this story so much. This is getting crazy how they still haven't worked this out. I think they are blowing this out of proportion a bit.

Awesome!!

I love this story! And I hope everything gets better between them!

please update!!!!!

It's sooo good!! Please tell me they work it out! This is such a good story!! Don't have it end soon!! Update ASAP!!

Secrets always have a way of revealing themselves. Love this story.

Please dont end the story so soon : ( If you do, you should do a sequel. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens between them. Great Update (as always)

I like it. Keep going!!

Maybe he should find something of hers at Rachel's house that she accidentally left there when she was staying ther and that's how he finds out what really happened.

I always though that she should have just told him. I knew something's me that was going to happen. I hope he gets the real story though. Crazy how he got her the same bracelet though. Love it. Hope it doesn't end too soon. I could read this story for a whole longer.