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  • HereinParadise

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    oooooooooooo I loved the new Chapter!
    April 30th, 2013 at 06:23am
  • Thatmom

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    Your week was horrible yet you still took the time to give us a great chapter. Thank you.
    April 29th, 2013 at 12:35pm
  • Thatmom

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    Loved this!! It didn't seem filler at all. Hope your week gets better!'
    April 24th, 2013 at 04:30am
  • AshleyVC88

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    So precious!

    Hope your week gets better!
    April 24th, 2013 at 02:40am
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    @ AshleyVC88
    Aw, thank you! Next time you should sleep though! :P
    April 22nd, 2013 at 06:52am
  • AshleyVC88

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    Oh snap. I smell a Rachel/J.Toews spin-off! Wink

    I just found this story today (approx 1.5 hours ago) and couldn't go to sleep until I read the whole thing. I'm going to be exhausted at work tomorrow but it'll be worth it. I love me some P.Kane and this is really well written. Smile
    April 22nd, 2013 at 05:44am
  • serendipity;

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    I really like that you're exploring Jon and Rachel, but it made me sad that he just walked out on her like that. I'm anticipating the next update!! Smile
    April 21st, 2013 at 08:39pm
  • abbesin

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    This is getting good!!!!
    April 21st, 2013 at 05:00pm
  • sarahryan

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    *POV
    April 21st, 2013 at 04:34pm
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    *POV
    April 21st, 2013 at 04:34pm
  • sarahryan

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    I like having Rachel and Jonathan's PIC.
    April 21st, 2013 at 04:34pm
  • bublbabie

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    I love SPOONS. That is a game that my family plays every time we get together for family reunions. We play the full contact version of it though. That means sliding across floors and wrestling for it. We have broken several pieces of furniture while playing that game.
    April 17th, 2013 at 07:05pm
  • KylieJames

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    So good! Can't wait for more!
    April 17th, 2013 at 04:49pm
  • MMM26

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    Well that was intense! I love protective Patrick!
    April 17th, 2013 at 02:28pm
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    Spoons is my game, man! I used to play it all the time with my team!

    That last chapter scared me a bit hahaha. I thought her dad would beat the shit out of Patrick for sure.
    April 17th, 2013 at 01:40pm
  • HereinParadise

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    Loved the new update. omfg spoons is the game.
    April 17th, 2013 at 01:20pm
  • countingxstars

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    @ bublbabie
    In chapter 7, Lilly tells the story of what happened with her Dad. He was an abusive drunk. Beat her mom, hence why she hates him. Hope that helps :)
    April 17th, 2013 at 08:07am
  • bublbabie

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    This maybe a stupid question but I can't remember if you had this in the story already and if you did, I don't remember what it was. I am reading lots of stories and sometimes the details all kind of blend together. Do we know what happened with her dad? Should we know already? Or is that still to come?
    April 17th, 2013 at 08:04am
  • bublbabie

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    Patrick is going to find that bracelet right? That is how he is going to find out about the little visit?
    April 14th, 2013 at 02:45pm
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    @ beforeyoureyesxx
    Of course not! If I were her that's what I would do. But sure! As long as you update SUPER soon! Smile
    April 8th, 2013 at 03:16pm
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