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  • Leaving Memories

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    I swear this story always leaves me hanging and wanting to grab the characters and hold them. Poor Jimmy. I love this story so much. I can't wait for another update. And if you need anyone to be a girlfriend for one of the lonely men, I'll definitely take a role as that ;)
    March 25th, 2013 at 02:52am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    :( Damn you woman!!! The whole time I was reading this all I could think was "Poor Jimmy". The thought of him laying in bed, hugging a pillow in the darkness and crying is so heartbreaking:( Now, all that said, i kind of cheered when Izzy gave him a shot to the face for being such an ass. That was great! lol.. So, just throwing it out there AGAIN, lol, if you need another lady for one of these guys *Cough*Shadows *Cough*, I would love to be a part of this!!!
    March 25th, 2013 at 02:37am
  • mollymoshpit;

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    Just when I thought I couldn't cry anymore today. This is soo freaking sad. Poor jimmy. Although he shouldn't have been an ass I understand what he's coming from. Hopefully he'll be okay and back to his old old self in some time.
    March 24th, 2013 at 11:23pm
  • gothique4

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    Aww I'm dead and I was pregnant with what would have undoubtedly been the cutest kid in the world if he or she took after Jimmy. But killing me off would certainly make Jimmy hate the world and everyone it.

    And as for the start of the chapter, I'm thinking that the guys were Night and Adam, but what the hell is that violet headed cunt Annie up to? I hope you're planning a particularly violent spectacular end for that bitch. I knew there was a reason I never liked her and her attitude much :-(
    March 24th, 2013 at 06:39am
  • shortygirl

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    @purple89

    :( the poor baby! I don't see Jimmy dating for awhile
    March 24th, 2013 at 01:42am
  • purple89

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    @ shortygirl
    yeh...the baby would have died along with Dana because she wouldnt have been that far along...it was sad to throw that in there but i needed to break Jimmy even more with the thought of losing not one, but two people even if he didn;t know she was pregnant.
    March 24th, 2013 at 12:15am
  • shortygirl

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    No!! Those fuckers killed Dana and took Jimmy's heart with them. Its sad to see Jimmy being mean. She's was pregnant? Does that mean the baby died?
    March 24th, 2013 at 12:09am
  • HanerJoy

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    poor Jimmy :( Thanks Izzy for making him see the light :) Update soon :D
    March 23rd, 2013 at 10:21pm
  • Madam Shadows;

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    I'm scared to know what's going to happen.. :(
    March 23rd, 2013 at 10:08pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, poor Jimmy :( I'm glad tht Izzy and Annie knocked and talked some sense into him can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    March 23rd, 2013 at 09:21pm
  • heretic.

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    You're very welcome lovely!
    Oh poor Jim jam! :( Loving Annie's hair colour though!! Shit's about to go down!!
    March 23rd, 2013 at 09:17pm
  • helena_88

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    okay so the dudes in the beginning of this chapter. can it be Night- I have a feeling he's the suit type- and the other either Gontier or Taylor.. BUT the chick with violet hair.. That got to be Annie- she got that hair color now.. BUT why would she be on their side.. goddamn it Mr. Green

    oh dude you totally aimed for us all to cry didn't you?? the whole Jimmy thing.. shit-pommes!! so heartbreaking and sad! I just wanted to jump into this story to tackle him into a big hug and tell him that everything will be okay.. and not only did he loose Dana- but she was pregnant too? that's just cruel Mr. Green
    March 23rd, 2013 at 09:16pm
  • MusicFan

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    Great update! I don't know what Adam is up to, but it doesn't seem good. And I'm still holding out hope for Shadows and Izzy to get back together:)
    March 19th, 2013 at 07:15am
  • MoMo_92

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    Zacky ur a creeper, Matt she doesn't feel the same about u anymore and Brian come home please can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    March 17th, 2013 at 11:27pm
  • Moriarty;

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    There's drama already- I love it! Zacky keeps sneaking up, the creepy little dude is already getting weird.
    I don't know if they should be trusting Adam, even though he's got a little bit of a sob story behind him- I think they need to be careful about who they trust. I hope Izzy and Brian can have some cute smoochy time cause they're so adorable together!
    March 17th, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • HanerJoy

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    Ohhh Izzy, I really wouldn't trust in Adam anymore, you snapped at him really nasty, that can affect his ego. I hope he didn't team up with them, but it can happen.
    March 17th, 2013 at 07:12pm
  • shortygirl

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    Poor Izzy :( Night just won't give her a break and Vengeance ugh. I love that man but he just won't give up will he.

    I hope Adam isn't teaming up with Night and Taylor. That would just be fucked up!

    The only person who hasn't there heart broken is Johnny and well Jimmy but he has someone.
    March 17th, 2013 at 02:45am
  • gothique4

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    Yep, Zacky certainly doesn't do normal. The chemistry between them is still there but damn creeping up on her in the dark was, well, creepy lol.

    I think he's spot on though that Adam's feeling scorned and he's joining forces with Night and Taylor because he's had his feelings hurt.

    Poor Matty - he's got to watch the woman he loves wanting Brian with her instead of him. The poor dude needs a love interest but my evil mind is coming up with some who's just as stubborn and mutinous as him so I can watch some sparks flying :p

    And poor Johnny's been stuck with Mrs Palmer this whole time - there's gotta be some love for the gnome out there somewhere.
    March 17th, 2013 at 02:13am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Frick, I love this so much already! Its so well written. I love how you just dove right into the action in this. Never a dull moment. Hopefully Izzy doesnt get blinded by what used to be with Adam, at least Vengeance is on his trail. And *SIGH* I agree with CherryV, Matt needs a love interest. If you need a candidate pick me ,pick me!! lol. I have a sneaking suspicion that maybe Izzy ends up with him after all though...have to wait and see.
    March 17th, 2013 at 01:05am
  • heretic.

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    @ purple89
    Is that a challenge? Haha. I think if it were like a female version of Johnny that would be cool.
    March 17th, 2013 at 12:57am