Dominating Karina - Comments

@ psychotic secrets;
Thanks a lot :)

Hello, I'm from the Chains, whips, fetishes, OH MY! contest. First of all I like to say this was well written. Though the beginning was a bit confusing. Beyond that I thought the detail of the fetish was written nicely. I thought you built the character Karina quite well too. You have her a personality and good looks, which every story needs. In the three chapters I thought you did everything quite well. I never would think he would have other slaves! That was a good surprise to have for the story. I also like how they had a small issue in the end. Karina not wanting to disappoint him is something real and something people go though all the time. So that gave the story a nice real touch to it.

Overall you did the fetish good and made a great story.

I love this! This was so good. You have such good writing styles, and this was so HOT!

The sequel is coming soon :)

i love it! i hope theres a sequel

Oh my gosh this was awesome. I would really like to see this continued. I think it's too good to stop

I think that this is pretty interestng to read and it would be fun to read more, as in a story.

I really liked it. I hope there's a sequel. :)

I love it! Plzz let there be a sequal!

@ Rath
thank you so much. I appreciate the comment :)

Ooooo I really liked it. It made me hot 'n bothered lol. I really liked how blunt Matt was with her and how he just took control over her in the laundry room. I would not mind be handcuffed to a bed by Matthew. Kari is one lucky girl. :) I really liked it and I wouldn't mind reading another chapter of this. I wonder what Matt is gonna do to her. ;) Great job and thank you for entering the contest. :)

I love it. Another chapter please!