I really enjoyed reading this. It was very relaxed but also full of so much emotion. I really like how you knew your facts and wasn't just like 'there's a war going on' you were actually specific on which war and everything like that. I also like the fact that it wasn't a happy ending and how even after all of that time Elena was still very much attached to Charlie. The small details used in the ending made it to where the reader could tell that she was not doing fine with out Charlie. You did a real good job thanks for entering in my contest :)
March 17th, 2013 at 09:21pm