ITS SOOOOO GOOD!
March 24th, 2013 at 03:27am
My Brutal Romance - Comments
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ITS SOOOOO GOOD!March 24th, 2013 at 03:27am
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ITS SOOOOO GOOD!March 24th, 2013 at 03:27am
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ITS SOOOOO GOOD!March 24th, 2013 at 03:27am
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i realize that i haven't uploaded in a while and i missed the date i was supposed to by a week. im very very very sorry i actually had the chapter written and then my cat stepped on my computer and somehow crashed it. so, in light of recent events, i have decided to post 3 new chapters by friday night! thank you all for your patience and i sincerely hope this does not happen again. <3 look forward to new smut and sexy sex time!!!March 20th, 2013 at 06:11pm
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The pleasure really is all mine Hun. Keep up the awesome work.- ForAllTheBandoms:
- @ MCRLUCY
i completely agree with your criticisms actually! i had meant to do that but somehow it just didn't transfer that way. originally i had written the start on my ipod and sent it over, during which time the format fucked up. thank you so much for everything!! i really really appreciate it <3
March 15th, 2013 at 11:15pm -
@ HarleyHomicide
thanks! i plan to and i'll upload the next chapter tonight :)March 14th, 2013 at 02:45am -
@ MCRLUCY
i completely agree with your criticisms actually! i had meant to do that but somehow it just didn't transfer that way. originally i had written the start on my ipod and sent it over, during which time the format fucked up. thank you so much for everything!! i really really appreciate it <3March 14th, 2013 at 02:44am -
I really like this! Please continue!!!!March 14th, 2013 at 02:08am
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I've subscribed AND recommended! This is a perfect start and reads far better than most Frerard's. it takes a lot for me to like this genre because everything seems to sound the same. The ONLY criticism I have is that I think you just need to clearly separate the "13 Months Prior" part. It'll give it clear definition. Also, and this is just personal preference only, you may want to think about breaking the text and speech into clear paragraphs/breaks. I just think it looks very busy on the page when you don't separate the dialogue from the descriptive parts of the story. Other than that, I seriously cannot fault this story so far! Very well doneMarch 13th, 2013 at 10:47am
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@ Gerardways
thank you @_@ ive already started ch 2 and it should be done by wed. :)March 11th, 2013 at 04:52am -
This is fantastic!March 11th, 2013 at 04:32am
