Sweet Little Sub - Comments

How did she go from skin and bones a couple of days ago when she was at the masquerade to having a bulge in her belly? Weird!!

Hope your doing ok! just finished rereading from the beginning. Still love it :)

Matt's becoming a softie with the news of being a daddy and I knew it

Awww Matt is so sweet and protective :) but.. Why would you end it there.? Thats just plain mean :(

Yay! A baby xD also I like when Matt's all sweet like that

I can't wait to see what happens next!

I KNEW IT

I'm so smart. Awww, they're gonna have a baby Shadows

Only bad things can happen if her brothers find out about the pregnancy!

Loved the update

I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hahaha I'm so smart... I hope her brother doesnt mess this up for her

Oh snap, shit just got real! Mikaela's preggers from their first time together; And I love how Jimmy knew on the way to the hospital haha! Can't wait for the next chapter, I have a feeling it's gonna be epic. I'm really interested to see how Shadows starts to take in everything.

love it :)

im in love with this story please update soon!!!

I knew it!!!!!! A mini Matt or a mini Mikaela is on the way :D but I definitely didn't see Jimmy being all doctor oc her telling her she was pregnant lol And I definitely didn't see the last part coming. I wonder what Duncan will do. Update as soon as you can!!!!!!

Sorry it's taken me so long to comment. It's been a crazy week. I like how she just looked through Matt's drawers for socks. I wonder why she is puking.

Well, she's either caught a stomach bug or she has a bun in the oven. If she has a bun cooking, that would be very bad

I'm intrigued to know the reason that Duncan is nervous of Matt, and how he knows him in another way than everyone else. And I'm so excited for the dinner! :D

I literally did a happy dance and scared my cat when I saw you updated. :3 I hope she isn't what I think she is and that it's a flu. I'm excited to read more, I forgot that I messages you when you asked about people wanting to be in the story. That took me by surprise but a really awesome surprise. =D

OHhhhhh I think I know what it is that is making her sick because of the smell and i hope i'm wrong because if it's what i think it is ugh i would be mad unless what i think it is isnt what would make me mad....that doesnt make sense but hopefully you understand and oh no i dont like that her brother doesnt like matt

Ohh oh I hope Mikaela is not terrible sick, or the firt thing that crossed my mind. Matt is so good to her :) poor cooker with his soup I hope he didn't get offended too much lol and I don't think Matt will do anything bad to Mikaela, but I am intrigued in what he did that Mikaela's brother said that.

I forgot that I never commented on the newest chapter. I hope you're still writing for the story. It's a really good one, one of my favorite fanfics that I've read in a while. I yelled at my phone when you left at that cliffhanger. My brain wants to know more. Especially why her brothers are scared about Matt being her new Dom. I've got theories and am excited to see if any of them are correct.
I love your writing and this story. Hope you update soon. :)

I really like this story and the many questions I have about everyone. Sad I just found it and missed my chance to be paired with these rather sexy dominant men, When Johnny got into it when Marco I had to fan myself lol. I can't wait to read more!

i have to say i absolutely love darla, and her brothers shouldnt be too scared of matt if darla paid attention to how he reacted with Mikaela