Okay, this story seems really good! I really like the idea of Ansley being trapped between the two worlds, and the whole concept is really interesting. I thought Kellam was funny when he was at the party, and he was trying to hook up with that girl, and then he changed his mind because she was being a hot mess and throwing up and couldn't control herself. I think this story is really good so far, and I can’t wait to see what you come up with for it next. You’re a great writer and I think your story is exceptional!
August 9th, 2013 at 06:30pm