This story just gets better and better. I can't wait to see what happens. Harry was definitely going to say I love you...seems to be like he should just end his ways and ask her to be his girlfriend. Plus, I agree, Louis himself has a girlfriend but he's telling Haz no...well not necessarily no just pointing out that he was changing and it seemed like he didn't like it. Anyway, great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens at the dinner...oh dear.
I WOULD JUST LIKE TO SAY THAT I LOVE THIS STORY AND YOUR WRITING AND I WOULD VERY MUCH ENJOY MORE STORIES FROM YOU. :) Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!!
@ justSJ haha no worries! in the author's note to chapter fifteen I mentioned that I've been working on a few other stories and I was curious if anyone would be interested in reading 'em.