Young volcanoes is my absolute favorite! Such an amazing album.
That little flashback made me smile! The nickname for Harry is hilarious :P I liked the idea of Ed moving in while the guys are on tour.. I feel like Blair just shouldn't be alone right now, for some reason. You've got a fluff lover in me as well. Those tiny moments just make the whole relationship between them what it is.. Great job :)
-Xx Oh and thanks for that picture, I hadn't seen it before but it was quite fitting! :) I saved it.
I haven't commented in a while, but I am loving this story! I think that it's wonderful and I love their little family and this Blair's mom drama and I can't wait to hear the full story of Eleanor and Louis, cause that'll be good. I loved your one shot of Niall and Jenny! So adorable! :) Can't wait for another update!
Now that is a good motto: peace, love and procrastination. I'm all for it. We should get T-shirts and stuff.
She felt like she had to get the old blair back, well.. maybe this was part of it. Resorting to her old ways a little bit. I liked how someone other than Harry was the one to get through to her this time, you wrote Zayn's view of her quite well :)
i like this chapter and i like how zayn knows her so much and i get why harry snapped at zayn but he's got to know that he was just trying to help her. i'm intrigued with louis though i feel like her and zayn are closer than her and louis ever since the whole engagement thing. :)
A mess maybe, but an understandable mess. Gosh, the amount of time you must've put into this chapter really shows. Great job. I like her and Nick together, you should definately write more of them :) Didn't quite expect her mum to have such a 'complete' family, I wonder how she'll explain that to blair in the coming chapter(s?)
I actually really liked this chapter. It gave a lot of background info & it was adorable. The part with her dad reminded me of my mom & my dad when she was pregnant with my older brother (she was also 24 and pregnant with him). My grandpa told my parents they were making a big mistake. My mom got up & said I'll be sure to tell your grandson that when he's older & asks how you reacted. And she sure did, and now we're a bunch of bad ass grandchildren & our grandpa is lucky as fuck & we know what he said and we don't like him as much! LAwl.
Things are picking up a bit more now, but the chapters are still lovely. Great way to balance things out :) I don't mind either point of view. Right now I am writing in third person because it was a nice change for me, I feel it allows you to be a little more.. 'sophisticated' in your writing (at lack of a better word). At least it stops me from rambling unnecessarily. I think it'll be a great story whichever way you choose to write it, trust your skills :)
Lovely chapter, I liked the part where Harry sent her pictures of Darcy staring at the radio. It's such a small thing but very spot on, I could see a child her age definately do that.