Isn't She Lovely? - Comments

  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    I WANT SOME TALK WITH LOUIS! Love me some Louis.
    April 19th, 2013 at 11:42pm
  • amaya.-.

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    Young volcanoes is my absolute favorite! Such an amazing album.

    That little flashback made me smile! The nickname for Harry is hilarious :P
    I liked the idea of Ed moving in while the guys are on tour.. I feel like Blair just shouldn't be alone right now, for some reason.
    You've got a fluff lover in me as well. Those tiny moments just make the whole relationship between them what it is..
    Great job :)

    -Xx
    Oh and thanks for that picture, I hadn't seen it before but it was quite fitting! :) I saved it.
    April 19th, 2013 at 11:37pm
  • flowerchild7

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    I haven't commented in a while, but I am loving this story! I think that it's wonderful and I love their little family and this Blair's mom drama and I can't wait to hear the full story of Eleanor and Louis, cause that'll be good. I loved your one shot of Niall and Jenny! So adorable! :) Can't wait for another update!
    April 19th, 2013 at 12:22am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    UM HELLOOOOO SASSY HARRY! Zayn was just trying to help and oH LOOK, IT WORKED. Zayn, you have permission to love me.
    April 18th, 2013 at 04:27am
  • Jei-Ukime

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    Nawww I love the relationship they have. It's so sweet
    April 18th, 2013 at 01:22am
  • justSJ

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    Awe poor Blair :(
    April 17th, 2013 at 06:06pm
  • amaya.-.

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    Now that is a good motto: peace, love and procrastination. I'm all for it. We should get T-shirts and stuff.

    She felt like she had to get the old blair back, well.. maybe this was part of it. Resorting to her old ways a little bit.
    I liked how someone other than Harry was the one to get through to her this time, you wrote Zayn's view of her quite well :)

    Lovely chapter, really was.

    -Xx
    April 17th, 2013 at 05:25pm
  • imacrimiminal

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    i like this chapter and i like how zayn knows her so much and i get why harry snapped at zayn but he's got to know that he was just trying to help her. i'm intrigued with louis though i feel like her and zayn are closer than her and louis ever since the whole engagement thing. :)
    April 17th, 2013 at 05:02pm
  • loveleycliquet

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    Territorial harold is being territorial. I love this aaaaand already subscribed to your new one. Can't wait.
    April 17th, 2013 at 03:06pm
  • sophiamarie

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    Don't doubt yourself, this story is just as awesome as your others!! I'm excited to see where you take it!
    April 17th, 2013 at 02:56pm
  • loveleycliquet

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    well, blair's got every right to snap at that woman. she had children she has looked after... and she left her. fuck thaat shit
    April 16th, 2013 at 04:38am
  • hkychk

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    Blair had every right to be pissed!! Love this story!!
    April 16th, 2013 at 03:35am
  • amaya.-.

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    A mess maybe, but an understandable mess.
    Gosh, the amount of time you must've put into this chapter really shows. Great job.
    I like her and Nick together, you should definately write more of them :)
    Didn't quite expect her mum to have such a 'complete' family, I wonder how she'll explain that to blair in the coming chapter(s?)

    Excellent job
    -Xx
    April 16th, 2013 at 12:04am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    I actually really liked this chapter. It gave a lot of background info & it was adorable. The part with her dad reminded me of my mom & my dad when she was pregnant with my older brother (she was also 24 and pregnant with him). My grandpa told my parents they were making a big mistake. My mom got up & said I'll be sure to tell your grandson that when he's older & asks how you reacted. And she sure did, and now we're a bunch of bad ass grandchildren & our grandpa is lucky as fuck & we know what he said and we don't like him as much! LAwl.
    April 12th, 2013 at 07:30pm
  • amaya.-.

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    Things are picking up a bit more now, but the chapters are still lovely. Great way to balance things out :)
    I don't mind either point of view. Right now I am writing in third person because it was a nice change for me, I feel it allows you to be a little more.. 'sophisticated' in your writing (at lack of a better word). At least it stops me from rambling unnecessarily.
    I think it'll be a great story whichever way you choose to write it, trust your skills :)

    Lovely chapter, I liked the part where Harry sent her pictures of Darcy staring at the radio. It's such a small thing but very spot on, I could see a child her age definately do that.

    -Xx
    April 11th, 2013 at 10:45am
  • OliveRein

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    oooooh whats gonna happen with blair's mom?
    April 11th, 2013 at 04:44am
  • germanpower

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    third person stories are so cool and i know you will do amazing :) amazing chapter btw.
    April 11th, 2013 at 03:32am
  • Abmora01

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    Plz continue with radio 1...... And update soon can't wait:)
    April 11th, 2013 at 02:33am
  • justSJ

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    I listen to Nick everyday, too! :) ah I love him and I love that you added him, Finchy and even Tina in!
    April 11th, 2013 at 02:12am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Best story ever!!! Update soon please?
    April 7th, 2013 at 04:46pm