September 5th, 2013 at 05:16pm
You Ain't the Only Ones Who Want to Live it Up - Comments
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Oops I reread the first? chapter of the sequel again.. :3September 4th, 2013 at 04:16am
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Take your time to write sweetheart a sequel would be amazingJuly 28th, 2013 at 01:23am
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I'd love for you to finish this and read the sequel, I love the plot a lot and to see what happens next. I don't mind how long it will take, just knowing that the story is here to read is amazing.July 28th, 2013 at 12:21am
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Hmmm I think that Lex's dad might beat him and then Lex can move back in with Jacky :D I probably shouldn't hope for that but o'wellJuly 26th, 2013 at 02:06am
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FUCK YEAH SMUT
I need a life :3 July 25th, 2013 at 12:46am -
@ ironi1234
And maybe Austlan ;)
And thanks, I try ;)July 24th, 2013 at 09:41am -
@ JackBaraBoner
Haha its a compliement ;)
ikr! Kellic is sometimes ok but nothing beats the perfection of Jalex ^_^July 24th, 2013 at 09:08am -
@ ironi1234
Haha umm thanks? :)
and I tried reading other parings with smut and it just wasn't as good/amazing as Jalex ;)July 24th, 2013 at 09:02am -
@ JackBaraBoner
You live up to your username XD They will, they will, they will jalex smut is the best thing ever!July 24th, 2013 at 07:34am -
smut Smut SMut SMUt SMUT SMUT SMUT
okay that was a little weird but whatever I'm weird
July 24th, 2013 at 03:47am -
@ OvercastGirl
*winks mysteriously* I'm going to update again by tonight :)July 21st, 2013 at 08:08am -
Sex on the beach. I like it.July 21st, 2013 at 05:34am
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O.o sounds interesting xD I have to check them outJuly 20th, 2013 at 07:15pm
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It's cool take you time ♥June 22nd, 2013 at 03:58am
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I only read the first chapter, but off the bat, you don't need to state what point of view you're writing from, readers should be able to figure that out from the context. Also, you need to space out your paragraphs and your dialogue, it's very confusing to read when it's all mushed together. The chapter also seems very short, so I don't know if that's just because it was the first, but yeahJune 20th, 2013 at 09:49pm
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Wooh!June 17th, 2013 at 09:54pm
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To be honest... fanfiction or not I still don't like her. But yea a fic where she is a good person would be nice but I'd still not like her, just not as much?June 13th, 2013 at 12:27pm
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@ m0riarty
Yeah I think so. Holly was just so nasty and ugh. Jack deserves someone so much better ahem Alex ahem ;) Like I saw some pics of them together and shes just this blond slutJune 12th, 2013 at 10:55am -
@ ironi1234
no, Jolly even sounds ugly
wasn't Holly a Housebunny????
housebunnies are literally just blonde, fake sluts, so whatever.
jack was honestly out of her league, idek how it happenedJune 12th, 2013 at 10:20am
Oh yeah I put it here too incase someone didn't see I started a seuel, sorry