March 18th, 2013 at 05:34am
I can imagine the writers making Misha say this 'I do not understand what you mean, am I experiencing human puberty?' Which would make it one of my favorite Castiel one-liners.
Well done on keeping the characters so true to themselves, and it's a great plot line. I would recommend working on the paragraphs though, because it all being so close together makes it difficult to read and I did notice a few grammar errors.
Other then that though, I really enjoyed this story and it made me laugh a few times :)
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. I adjusted the formatting so it should be easier to read. Thanks again for being so constructive, it really helps :)