I commend you for your first time smut (who0)! It's always hard the very first time. Like my first time, Kellin topped and I had no idea what the hell I was writing, bUT GOOD JOB. HAD ME ALL HOT AND FLUSTERED FOR AWHILE THERE AND HE PROPOSED AND IT WAS JUST PERFECT AND I I I JUST CAN'T GREAT JOB KEEP WRITING OK c: <3