Biff, you're a serious genius with words. You bring out emotions that other writers often can't pull off, and you know how I'm so against LiLo; well, a part of me just gave up a bit of Larry and surrendered to the LiLo side. This was fucking brilliant.
This was freaking beautiful. I think you did an incredible job of getting inside Liam's head and expressing how he felt about the situation. Although he was sad, his sentiments were much more complicated than that.
The ending was so perfect. Not every relationship has a happy ending, and Liam's epiphany was the best way to end this. Though this is only a one-shot, I can feel Liam maturing throughout it, and it's so well done. I just hope that Liam gets a happy ending, too, eventually, whether it's with Zayn or someone else.