maps - Comments

I like the style, how it affects the pace of reading (there's probably a phrase for this, but I do not know), it's quite unique. You have the talent of saying so little and not making much sense but making it sound beautiful anyway. I've read this over a few times now but I'm still as ignorant as the first, however it appeals to me so I can't say I care too much.

@c0llided.

It's completely stylized; everything was done on purpose.

Just a bit of constructive criticism~
But you definitely need to work on your punctuation, capitalization and grammar.
Stories can be removed from the site if those ^^ are used incorrectly or not used at all.