Heartbroken - Comments

I don't read a lot of fan-fiction, simply because I don't normally know the people! However, this was written in a way that I could read it as an original, which I really liked.I really like your writing style, a perfect balance in descriptions is one of the most important things to me in a story and this has it! It was sad and emotional, the language you used really conveyed this. English isn't your first language!!! :-0 this is amazing! wow. just wow.

I don't really know if I should continue this, because I don't really know what it would be about, hehe. But thank you so so much, I appreciate your words very much :D

You should turn this into a full story. I love it, your writing is awesome and I find myself wanting more of this story.