Don't Leave Me - Comments

Ah I see what you did there!

I am not going to shoot you

@ Soy un Dorito!

SHOOT I forgot to do that! Doing it now:) Thank you!

@ XXXataktoulaXXX

THANK YOU BABY

Oh my, at first I thought this was going to be a bit cliché, with the whole junkie abusive parent hurting their child and whatnot, but as soon as she took out the punching bag, I knew this story was different.

I only read the two first chapters, but

I'LL BE BACK!

This is very interesting, it awakens so many emotions in me. One little detail, though, you should space out the paragraphs.

Great job, sistah

Dear author, just wow. I have no words for this. I have subscribed, hoping to read this to the end. By the way Lost boys is one of my fav films. <3 The summary was simple and nice and the first few chapters made me wanna read more and more. The characters are well brought up and interesting which adds to the story. I really like this and I believe you are off to a great start. ~Marian.

Dear author, just wow. I have no words for this. I have subscribed, hoping to read this to the end. By the way Lost boys is one of my fav films. <3 The summary was simple and nice and the first few chapters made me wanna read more and more. The characters are well brought up and interesting which adds to the story. I really like this and I believe you are off to a great start. ~Marian.