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January Rose (100)

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Oh man... It sucks when you get abused by someone who is supposed to be your friend or protector. Arden should go to jail for sexual abuse. I feel so bad for Hartley, she never asked for any of this.

I love how you went from the past to the present, but the story was still clear and easy to follow.

Great story, I'm just sad it's over.

April 29th, 2013 at 11:52pm

graphicromantics (100)

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I will never name my child Arden if I ever have a son.
*shudder*

April 22nd, 2013 at 02:01am

BeenDownThatRoad (100)

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:( I was right, it was her brother. This makes me want to cry for her, and then cut off her brothers genitals...sorry, but wow. This is powerful.

April 16th, 2013 at 05:56am

hangsang. (210)

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Ahhhh, chapter seven was wonderful! I hope I'll be able to read chapter eight at school tomorrow. :)

April 14th, 2013 at 06:38pm

graphicromantics (100)

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OH
MY
GOD

INTENSE

I'M SCREAMING

April 14th, 2013 at 05:34pm

BeenDownThatRoad (100)

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I NEED TO KNOW WHO IS DOING THIS TO HER!! ok, sorry for type yelling at you, lol, but I am so curious to know who this guy is, I have a sinking feeling like I know, and I hope i'm wrong, but...update this soon please! I really like your writing style:)

April 11th, 2013 at 04:07am

BeenDownThatRoad (100)

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wow, this is intense! I really want to know who this guy is that hurt her and is now in her house? I need to know the rest of this!

April 1st, 2013 at 02:29am

BeDope.BeProud. (100)

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Very detailed, update soon!

March 23rd, 2013 at 07:38pm