Nightcall - Comments

  • gipsy danger.

    gipsy danger. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    97
    Location:
    United States
    AHHHH
    SDAGKLASJG,H
    OH MAN YES
    IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO READ THIS AND OH MY GOD I NEED TO GO READ IT AGAIN BE RIGHT BACK

    whew alright, I think I'm alright, I can leave a coherent comment now :)

    At first Raychel found it easy to amuse herself. She caught up on the tv shows she'd missed and reading and hammering out the details of some of the fifty or so writing projects she was working on alongside the day job.
    oh man this is me literally like every day of my life haha

    Raychel reached under the bed and fumbled around for the hockey stick...
    HAVE YOU BEEN TO MY HOUSE WHEN I WASN'T THERE? Because oh goodness I really do keep a hockey stick under my bed

    Aidan smirked, looking her over. He caught her off guard when he suddenly lifted her from the ground and threw her over his shoulder. "There's only one lady I want to charm, and right now she's wearing too many clothes."
    OH HO YOU ARE SMOOTH AIDAN

    This was absolutely perfect. I don't have words. It was so amazing and I loved every single word of it. You just write so wonderfully and this was beautifully written like always! AND AIDAN. Oh Aidan. I just loved it so much.

    <3
    March 26th, 2014 at 10:20pm
  • kili the dwarf

    kili the dwarf (300)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    adorable! I love Aidan!
    January 22nd, 2014 at 02:14am
  • scute

    scute (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    so cute!! loved it!
    January 21st, 2014 at 02:50am